Comments on: Novelist Beware http://writeyourmindjournals.com/blog/2008/11/21/novelist-beware/ From one writer to another...sharing the experience. Tue, 13 Dec 2011 22:04:32 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: -- B J Keltz http://writeyourmindjournals.com/blog/2008/11/21/novelist-beware/comment-page-1/#comment-248 -- B J Keltz Mon, 24 Nov 2008 23:25:37 +0000 http://writeyourmindjournals.com/blog/?p=305#comment-248 All I can say is cleaning up the PoV and the passive voice is going to be like a day with a teenager. When you and Sean get to that point, I'll lend you my shoulder. :) My kids are now 21 and 18 but I still remember! lol. All I can say is cleaning up the PoV and the passive voice is going to be like a day with a teenager. When you and Sean get to that point, I’ll lend you my shoulder. :) My kids are now 21 and 18 but I still remember! lol.

]]> By: Sal http://writeyourmindjournals.com/blog/2008/11/21/novelist-beware/comment-page-1/#comment-246 Sal Mon, 24 Nov 2008 03:20:01 +0000 http://writeyourmindjournals.com/blog/?p=305#comment-246 Sometimes rebellion is the start of a new era. Sometimes rebellion is the start of a new era.

]]> By: -- B J Keltz http://writeyourmindjournals.com/blog/2008/11/21/novelist-beware/comment-page-1/#comment-232 -- B J Keltz Sat, 22 Nov 2008 15:40:24 +0000 http://writeyourmindjournals.com/blog/?p=305#comment-232 Let's hope he isn't too rebellious, lol. Let’s hope he isn’t too rebellious, lol.

]]> By: Writer Dad http://writeyourmindjournals.com/blog/2008/11/21/novelist-beware/comment-page-1/#comment-230 Writer Dad Sat, 22 Nov 2008 15:38:06 +0000 http://writeyourmindjournals.com/blog/?p=305#comment-230 Raise him well, go all to his performances, and overpay for his tuition. He'll probably be little like you expected, but in many ways better than you imagined. Good Luck! Raise him well, go all to his performances, and overpay for his tuition. He’ll probably be little like you expected, but in many ways better than you imagined. Good Luck!

]]> By: -- B J Keltz http://writeyourmindjournals.com/blog/2008/11/21/novelist-beware/comment-page-1/#comment-225 -- B J Keltz Sat, 22 Nov 2008 00:32:10 +0000 http://writeyourmindjournals.com/blog/?p=305#comment-225 Thanks, Sean. :) And thanks for coming to visit my little corner of the blogosphere. The jury is still out on whether I've produced something decent or just a bunch of crap. As you said, the child is born in the rough draft. You raise it in the revision. Thanks, Sean. :) And thanks for coming to visit my little corner of the blogosphere.

The jury is still out on whether I’ve produced something decent or just a bunch of crap. As you said, the child is born in the rough draft. You raise it in the revision.

]]> By: Writer Dad http://writeyourmindjournals.com/blog/2008/11/21/novelist-beware/comment-page-1/#comment-222 Writer Dad Fri, 21 Nov 2008 19:06:15 +0000 http://writeyourmindjournals.com/blog/?p=305#comment-222 Write on indeed, BJ. Congratulations with an exponent. You have smoked me all over the place. Write on indeed, BJ. Congratulations with an exponent. You have smoked me all over the place.

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